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Page 9 - "Contracts"

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Page 9 - "Contracts"

Postby r3v3rend on Tue Jun 30, 2009 1:46 am

Font Belizarius is awful to use in sizing. Anyhow, sorry for the delay. Trying to do some foreshadowing here. Hope people get it. Need to go to bed now.
Night.

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edit: ugh. Reread the dialogue this morning. This is what happens when you try and summarize your thoughts at almost 3 in the morning. I seriously need to rewrite that page. Sigh...

edit II: I am however happy with the reinking that I was able to do. After realizing how horribly "dirty" my original ink work was and how cheap it made me feel, especially when zooming in 300X to do the retouching, I knew I wouldnt be happy until I had cleaned it all up. With that said, I believe the next pages wont be so time consuming, since I will avoid the original inking process altogether and go right to the good stuff. So the page isnt entirely bad. Just not as satisfying as I'd hoped it would be after all that work. eh.
Im so critical today.
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Re: Page 9 - "Contracts"

Postby Mr Bright on Tue Jun 30, 2009 8:37 am

What cheer! I am terribly glad to see the beginnings of a wonderful version of hell.

The human souls used as street lighting? Excellent.

The implication that hell is evil with added paperwork? Wonderful.

The Gates reference? Well... expected, but well placed, which means a lot to me at least. The most horrible jokes in the world, reused until they are old and feeble, can still turn sprightly and young if presented correctly.
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Re: Page 9 - "Contracts"

Postby Jorge on Tue Jun 30, 2009 11:38 am

I love the red/green contrasts you're using R3v, especially the green light reflected off the demon's horn in the last frame. One of these years, I'll learn me how to do them colors good like. Right now, I'll get back to getting my grammar good.
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Re: Page 9 - "Contracts"

Postby r3v3rend on Tue Jun 30, 2009 1:11 pm

Jorge! So good to see that you have joined our forums! And Im glad you enjoy the comic as well. Do you still have yours up and running? If youve been updating it let me know, and send me the link. Thanks for joining the collective.

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Re: Page 9 - "Contracts"

Postby JJ Brice on Wed Jul 01, 2009 11:04 am

Ditto on R3V's post Hor-hay. Good to see you rocking the forum, and welcome.

I too, also, love this page, as well.

So ominous, yet campy, and delightful. Good work sir.

Turn the lights down and read this page with a flashlight like your favorite scary story...in a thunderstorm, and minus the flashlight, since it causes screen glare. But with may more lightning.

I am tired. I slept 10.5 hours last night, way too much, my body is all over-saturated with sleepy.

Anyway. I need to work on getting the scripts up and more written, been busy lately.

I realize that like 3 lines ago, this changed from a response to the new page into a stream of consciousness diary of sorts. I will stop now, so as not to trouble you all with the remaining drivel trickling from my thinking orb.
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Re: Page 9 - "Contracts"

Postby r3v3rend on Thu Jul 02, 2009 9:59 am

Mr Bright wrote:The implication that hell is evil with added paperwork? Wonderful.

I just typed out a long ass response and of course I was logged off. Isnt that awesome.
I was responding and had typed out such a wordy double talk response to illustrate how I pictured the Abyss would be like with paperwork. I thought it was pretty brilliant, but now that Ive lost it, I have no motivation to try again. pfft...

Anyway, yes, the Abyss, demons, paperwork, lots of it, regulations, rules, one demon entity for one week for one greater daemon.

Thats the extreme abridged version of what I wrote before.
f5cking govt computers...

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Re: Page 9 - "Contracts"

Postby BlueKnightOne on Thu Jul 02, 2009 6:55 pm

I think Mr. Gates may lose his Overlord status once Windows 7 hits. After playing with the beta, I'd say it was what Vista should have been at launch.
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